Confused sentence

"The Toolkit provides clinicians with the ability to document clinical observations for their patients with chronic conditions and use the Toolkit to prompt them for tests and appointments that are due depending upon the condition they have been diagnosed with."

The final "they" does not refer to the patients but to the clinicians which is not what the writer intended.

Rewrite as "Clinicians use the Toolkit to document clinical observations of their patients' chronic conditions. They also use the Toolkit to prompt them about appropriate tests and appointments for each patient."

Surrey Leader - Budget pressure builds on Fraser Health Authority

Surrey Leader - Budget pressure builds on Fraser Health Authority

This article hints at a merger between FHA and VCHA and about cost saving measures.

1. Enhance the application to extend the medical conditions covered within the application, thus providing clinicians with access to improved quality measurement analysis to enable improved care and outcomes for the residents of Saskatchewan living with chronic disease

Beginning sentences with the present participle

Fearing that directive settings could be misused by third parties (e.g.: insurance companies, telemarketers, etc) the system has been designed to limit and (in some cases) prevent directive lookups.

"Fearing" must be connected to noun or pronoun. The author declares that the system was fearing misuse of directive settings.
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My rewrite:
"The system has been designed to limit and prevent direct lookups because directive settings could be misused by third parties."

Plain English example

In the context of HL7 Vocabulary the term ‘Realm’, it is used to indicate a Binding Realm: that manages the bindings/substitutions of value sets to reflect local rules, and is a parameterization permitting internationalization of vocabulary – binding different value sets to the same message design being used in a different country .

A lengthy sentence saying nothing.

Each public sector business model describes a certain aspect of a public sector organization to allow a common and formal understanding of the current or planned business by a community to enable more effective and rigorous business planning and analysis.
It is impossible to tell what the author was really trying to say here.

MEIA’s business systems have become inflexible, increasingly fragile,and difficult to adapt to legislative changes.

It's not really clear what is being conveyed here. What does it mean for something to have become increasingly fragile? I could understand this if the systems had become fragile, but I'm not sure what it means that they have become increasingly fragile.

A simpler version will do:
MEIA’s business systems are inflexible, fragile,and difficult to adapt to
legislative changes

Loss of direction in a sentence.

System Acceptance Testing (SAT) means the testing of the PLIS and iEHR applications and interfaces through their various stages of build (component, candidate, staging and production) to the point where Team Sun has validated to the Province’s satisfaction that the iEHR and PLIS systems meet or exceed all contractual requirements for functionality and performance for release 1.